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Awesome, the re-written version rules!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!! it was very good! Keep it up!

I'm a guy, so I don't ND books, but this is real good. I liked it! :D

I liked it. I'm really not a fan of poetry, and there are only a few poems that I actually enjoy, this one is one of them. It is a ...

I really liked it. It was very interesting and descriptive, which is really good. After reading this, I want to go and read some more. Keep up the good work. ...

It was OK :? Some of the lines were bad and I didn't care for. It needs some work. I'll agree with claudette, study poetry. :x TG

I loved the wording. It was very descriptive. I like the edited version is really good. TG 8)

It was good. I liked the re-write. I did have me confused at some points, but overall, it was a good story. TG

It was OK, but I didn't care for them. Haikus just don't do it for me. TG :?

I'm going with once or twice a week. I'm not big on reading, but some of the stories I need to read and critique. There usually the one I like ...

Well, in this chapter I really wanted to tell people unfamiliar with Warhammer the history of the Tau, so sorry there wasn't much action. :?

Wow! I really liked it. I suck at poetry, and as a writer I wish I could do it better. :? Anyway, I loved the wording, it was painting a ...

Farsight paused, thinking over what Kauyon just said. Everyone knew he had stopped serving the Greater Good; it was no secret. His pride and greed had torn him away from ...

awesome story. I loved the wording. Your doing a good job. Im not a grammar expert, so I didnt see any wrong sentences. Its coming toaether nicely. TG

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